another crack at it

[ChicagoBob]

As posted in my albums here's another crack at Fuch's deathtone template. Hope ya like it fire away!!:2guns:

[justbob]

Looks good CB, I like the way you shaded around the temples and eyebrows...

[prtchevy]

I think the top half looks really good. The highlights on the forehead, brows, cheekbones and chin look real goo. My suggestion would be add a little shadow to the back/top of the lower jaw where it goes under the cheek bone to give it a sense of actually going under the top portion of the skull. Also a little shading on the outer most teeth give the perception that they are curving back around also under the cheekbone. I hope that makes sense.

[shane]

for me bob i think the thing you got to work on is the high lights,they are just to bright and big, unless this dude was using crest white strips theres no way hims teeth would be that bright, just tone it back a notch or two and your doing much better, the colors are lookin much better as far as a bone color, and the shading is really starting to be nice man! Keep it up and you'll get it :thinking:

[ChicagoBob]

for me bob i think the thing you got to work on is the high lights,they are just to bright and big, unless this dude was using crest white strips theres no way hims teeth would be that bright, just tone it back a notch or two and your doing much better, the colors are lookin much better as far as a bone color, and the shading is really starting to be nice man! Keep it up and you'll get it :thinking:

the dude had a good dentist, what can I say.:biggthump here's the same tag touched up, the brow is lookin pretty sweet I think.

[prtchevy]

the dude had a good dentist, what can I say.:biggthump .

The Crest white strips have really done wonders for him thats for sure.
I like the changes you made, giving him some cracks gives him more character.

[excesspaint]

It is better than the last one, you are making good progress. Add some more detail like texture and cracks to make it pop more.

[BAM3001]

Im neve going back to my dentist ever again -can I get yours ?

[wareagle2]

yo ! bob ! you give me incentive to try one of FUCHS stencils ,which I have in my little ,mitts.Now all I have to do is get some "trans root beer"

PS" may want to angle your camera flash to avoid the flashback

later dude

[mnop942]

蹲在厕所里观察蛆 世上最美味的泡面

Translation... What the Fuchs are you trying to say?

[PaintingWithPressure]

Looking good Bob , keep going at it , youll only get better!!